Promote Subscription Benefits Over Features in Seconds using AI
27 Sept 2024 · 25 min
Pete Ericson and Tyler show publishers how to use ChatGPT and a Benefits Copywriter app to rewrite subscription copy that focuses on what readers gain, not just what they get. They walk through real examples from the Boca Raton Tribune and show how to shift messaging across landing pages, registration forms, and upgrade prompts.
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Okay, so, so this, this, this particular episode is an output of one of my pet peeves and that's seeing publisher after publisher essentially vomit features of features to the potential subscriber versus focusing in on the benefits to the subscriber on, on all their touch points on the website. So what we're going to do here is I'm going to show you a, a very quick way using AI to take all the feature language that you have on the important parts of your website and convert it into benefits language, which is how to benefit the reader if they become a subscriber. So it's a conversion. This is a how to convert more subscribers with benefits language. And I'm going to show you how to use AI to literally in seconds output benefits copy. So if you stay to the end of this podcast, I'm going to show you, well, it's going to be on the YouTube channel. So if you're listening, you're going to have to go there and look at it. But I'm going to show you exactly how to do it step by step. And it's unbelievable. Like you will just absolutely be blown away by how you can take your, the, the language you, you currently have on your website, pop it into an AI tool and then it will spit out beautiful copy. Now let me back up a little bit. So back to the problem. So when I look at, and we're looking at the, to pick on the Boca Raton Tribune here, and this is a pretty classic example of a website that has features on it, but not benefits. And the features that I see across the board, Tyler, you probably see, you probably see this as well, are things like, okay, I get to some subscribe landing page with some copy and what do I see? I see something like, you know, get access to our 10,000 article archive or for news, we have decades of experience or get full access or get our premium newsletter or get our, you know, afternoon edition or get our print edition or early delivery. And these are great features. I mean, don't get me wrong, these are important features. But how do these features actually impact your paid subscriber? Like how does it make their life better? And that's the benefit for the reader turning into A subscriber. How do you make their life better? How do you make that subscriber the hero in your story? Does that make sense? Am I making sense? Makes sense, yeah. So I'm gonna, what I wanna do is just point you to a resource. It's a, it's, it's actually a book by Donald Miller. It's called Storybrand. And I'm on, I'm on the storybrand.com website here. And what I recommend is to get the book, just go to Amazon and grab that book. I've read it. We've done a whole, we did a whole rebrand ourselves. And basically the premise here is that you, in every organization's brand, there's, you know, you have products or services to sell and you have a villain to conquer to help your customers. And, and so in the publishing world, subscribers, you have the, the mission of helping your subscribers conquer the villain. And so as an example, just as an example. So for, for news, what's like one of the villains could be misinformation, right? Like there's just a lot of misinformation out there. And one of the missions of a, let's say a news site could be to basically get, get accurate reporting, make sure that readers know what the real deal is to cut through that misinformation. Now I know that's a hot political topic, but that's, that's just one example, right? So how, how do you, if that reader becomes a paid subscriber, you're gonna help that paid subscriber cut through the misinformation and whatever, and that's gonna help their lives in X, Y and Z ways. Does that make sense? I know I'm getting pretty philosophical here, but this is the, this book will walk you through how to build a brand for your publication. It is, it is. It's an amazing journey. I read audiobooks, I listen to audiobooks and read them. But uh, that's my way. Get the audiobook or read the, the physical book, whatever. I absolutely recommend this book. It'll give you a, give you a framework for it. So making the reader the hero. And this is where the, the, the benefits come into play. I'm going to go back to booker. Let's look at an example. So if I hit the subscribe button on their site, I'm going to pull up there, subscription landing page here and.
Pick on that subscribe button too, by the way, really quick, make that my account, not also red button.
Yeah, good point.
Just blatantly on my radar there. If you're if you're listening to this, they have two red buttons that look exactly the same for My account and subscribe, and they're right next to each other. Try to, try to make your My account button less prominent. Anyway, continue.
Just a text link. Well, we are, we are talking about touch points here. Yep. There are really four major touch points that I'm going to cover. So what we're looking at here is the, the subscribe subscription landing page. And what do we see on here? Okay, we see a promotion. First two months for the price of one. Okay, that's fine. Act now for unlimited access feature. Okay, I get unlimited access. See, I get 24. 7 access to the website feature. Let's see, Unlimited access to all Our Archives Since 2010 feature. Let's see the E. Newspaper, a digital replica of the newspaper feature. Daily newspaper feature. See where I'm going here? These are good. I mean, as a potential subscriber, this, this is good, but we want. Great. We want compelling. We want to help that subscriber, you know, conquer the villain of misinformation or be, be more connected or, you know, feel like they're part of the community. There's, there's, there's benefits here. And I'm going to show you in a second how this plays out. Okay, so the, the touch points, the four touch points that I want to do. This is a bit of a homework for you. You who are listening is look at your subscription landing page, which is the page we're looking at right now. Look at your free registration, which we'll look at in a second. Look at your upgrade message. So once somebody's registered on the site for free, and then they get hit with the upgrade message. And also look at your free email newsletter to get these, get this benefits copy into. Those are the four, I'd say most critical areas. Did I miss anything?
Yeah, that's. That's it.
I think those are pretty good. Okay, so, all right, how do we quickly, like, change the, change the game here for Boca Raton? All right, so I'm gonna hop into chat GPT. If you don't, if you don't have, uh. And by the way, this, you have to, you have to use the paid version. It's 20 bucks a month. Um, what I recommend is if you haven't used it, just sign up. It'll be the best 20 bucks you ever spent. Um, and it's. And it'll. You can cancel afterwards and that. And that's fine. So. Or if you have a friend who has it Just, just, just borrow it. But here we are, ChatGPT. And what you're going to do is you're going to find a. An app. Um, it's called Benefits Copywriter. All right, and how do you do it? Basically, you click on this Explore GPTs button and you go to the. It's like the app store for, for AI, for Chat GPT. And you can find, like, you find all sorts of stuff in here, like, you know, recipes and, and this is some sort of PDF generator. And they got, you know, writing assistance, productivity assistance, education, lifestyle programming. And you're just going to type. Type in the words Benefits copywriter into the search and that'll bring up. Bring it up. And then what you'll do is you'll pin it. Now, mine's already pinned here, but there's a. Somewhere in here is a message to essentially pin to the sidebar. So, so it's there just waiting for you. And then it shows up here and you can see Benefits Copywriter is an app. So what I'm going to do is I just hop over here into the app, and I've already done a little bit of work here. What did I do? I went to the Boca Raton about page. And one thing I've noticed about publications is that generally have pretty good about pages. Like, there's a lot of information on, like, if you look at your own about page, I'm going to guess that there's probably some good, like, historical information and who you are and what you do, mission, maybe some mission information. All this stuff is, is the core of who you are. And we just need to basically translate the, the. This core into benefits. So. And I know this is going to look crazy, but what I did was what you're going to do is you're going to copy all the text on your about page. And in this case, you see that, you know, it's. It's a number of paragraphs. Copy that in and you go into the Benefits copywriter and you write a prompt, which is essentially telling the AI what to do. And you can just, just copy this. Please write up the benefits of subscribing to the. In this case, Boca Raton Tribune. It's going to be your name of your publication, and you're going to paste the about us copy into this. Okay. And I. So I did that. And check out the output. Here's the output. Here's a detailed breakdown of the benefits of subscribing to the Bokeh Raton Tribune based on the features. And you'll get a table. It's got three columns, right? So what the AI does is it pulls out the features, it extrapolates a benefit second column and then gives you a dimensional benefit, which is a pretty fancy word I've never heard before. But it, it's, it's interesting in that it's, this is what really sort of gives you the benefit copy that you can use to write up to edit your website. So just look at the first one. So the feature is longest running print newspaper in Boca Raton. Okay, so that's something straight out of the about right off the about us page. What's the benefit to the reader? Gain deep insights and perspectives from a publication that has been a trusted part of the community for over a decade. Okay, that sounds pretty good. But what's the, what's the, the real personal benefit to that reader? That's the dimensional benefit. So that extrapolates to feel confident in the news you consume, knowing it comes from a source with over 400 editions worth of local experience and commitment. Feel confident. So let me point this out. What you're doing is your longest running print newspaper in Boca Raton translates into making the reader feel more confident about the news. See how that works? The feature is, yeah, we're the longest running print newspaper that doesn't do anything for the reader. I mean, it does obviously, but you have to tell them what it does and it's going to create confidence, it's going to feel confident in the news you consume. And I, and, and so grab this copy, edit it. I mean you have to edit everything AI produces for sure. But this becomes sort of a foundation for, for the language of what the actual benefit is. And then you can, you can do some editing for, to suit your, your, your taste and style and brand. What do you think, Tyler?
I love it. I, it just reminds me of, of like when you buy a car, you know, you see all the features, you see the heated seats, you see the heated steering wheel, you see all these like, features. But like, what's the benefit of that? Right? It's like, oh, I'm not going to freeze to death in the winter when I'm driving or I can not have to go to the gas station because I have an electric car. You know, like these are all benefits like oriented language that you see on virtually anything that you buy.
Yep, exactly.
Yeah.
Let me see if there's one, maybe one more to pick on. So if you're listening is 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8 features that got picked out of that about us page. Family owned and operated with local columnists. 100% community oriented news. Leading source of hyper local news. Award winning community service. Correct election predictions for six consecutive municipal elections. Whoa, that's pretty interesting. Let's look at that one because that's pretty timely. So correct election predictions for six consecutive municipal elections. So this was pulled off the website directly. So what's the first benefit? Trust in accurate and insightful political coverage that reflects the pulse of Boca Raton. It's pretty good. Trust. But what's the dimensional benefit? There's that word again. Dimensional benefit. Gain a deeper understanding of local politics. Boosting your confidence in participating in the civic process.
Crazy, right?
Yeah, boosting your confidence. Now that's the benefit to your reader. You're helping them boost their confidence. So you're going from feature. Hey, we're great at, at predicting elections. That's nice. But the benefit is deeper understanding for the reader and boosting their confidence when they participate. Right. I. Am I, am I the only one like completely blown away by this? This is, this is so easy and works so well. And I gotta say, just in general from using AI, AI is really good at copywriting. It does a very good job. You gotta edit, of course, but it can, it can crank something out that's maybe 80% there. And then you go in and you edit it and you fine tune it. Save you a ton of time. I know there's a lot of concern about AI and I can't speak to the future dark side of it if there is one, but I can speak to the usefulness of it as a tool right now. Okay. So I'm not going to go through all these, one more step here. So we got all these things here and we have touch points to deal with. Right. So let's, let's actually just hop over to, to a touch point.
And.
Oh yeah, so let's, let's first. Touch point. Free registration. Just going to mention this because it's so important even though we talk about it all the time. I'm going to go go hit an article.
Come on.
Right there we go. And click in.
And.
Okay, running away here and we get some sort of audio message here. That's sort of odd. Okay. Oh well, okay. The free registration. I wouldn't sweat that one too much. That one's all about get access to this story, get this article now, get this story now. And then get our newsletter. Like those are really the only two points on the free registration front.
So let's just.
I know that I have.
Yeah, and in that case, the reader knows the benefit quite clearly. So they're going to get this information. They're going to be informed about in the case, the Rotary International Club or whatever.
So, yeah, let me just do a quick, quick incognito here just to. Because I'm already logged in. That's what you're getting. All right, so here it is. So this particular touch point when you're collecting the, you're forcing the email and registration in the, in the free registration flow. If you're, if you don't have a free registration flow, we have a lot of content about it. Bottom line is give away an article, maybe two at the most, for free, require this free registration. That'll build your email list 20% or more. It's amazing how it works. You'll get higher quality readers logged into your site, which gives you some, some benefits on like tracking what articles are converting. And, but the, the, the point here, the, the motivation is I'm going to read this next story. You can do it. It's free. The story is free for you. Create a free account and then get the newsletter. Those are, that's it. Keep it simple. Benefit is access to the article. Okay, so that's the free registration. Just got to cover that because we got to cover the free registrations. So important.
Yeah.
Okay, so then the next, the next touch point is the upgrade message, right? Okay, so here I'm logged into Boca Raton and I have read my free articles and now I'm stopped and I get the upgrade message. So here's a touch point super important. You must, the message here is you must upgrade your account to read the rest of the content. Okay? Not much of a compelling, not much compelling copy here. So what do we do? All right, so let's go back to our friend Chat GPT and then here's something else for you to copy. So you have this table, right? And you have, you have this sort of these dimensional benefits that you can copy. What do you, how do you like insert this stuff into your, into their subscription tag and into your landing page. Your subscription landing page, which we'll talk about. So what you do is you give ChatGPT another prompt, okay. And you can just copy this. So using all the dimensional benefits, write up a compact sales paragraph with a one or two sentence intro and bullet points. So you want to make something that you can fit onto your subscription landing page and something that you can fit onto your subscription. Nag when they see, when they see it. So what is, what does ChatGPT do with the benefits copywriter it kicks out. Subscribing to the Boca Raton Tribune helps or keeps you informed, connected and engaged with everything happening in your community. Here's what you'll get a subscriber and then let's see. 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8 bullet points. You know, confidence in the news you consume with over 400 editions worth of local experience and commitment to Boca Raton. I'm not going to read them all. You can take a look at them if you're watching this. But the point is is you can literally grab this and paste this on into your both your subscription landing page and your your subscription nag. So here you can. What I would do of course is probably, you know, pare this down a bit. You probably want to edit this down maybe there's sort of four major bullet points of information that that are really strike home with your reader. And then you can of course edit, you know, the little intro sentence. I know you guys are good at editing, so I won't belabor that. But literally just take that and, and add it to this subscription nag here and you have a much more compelling reason to subscribe and use a button that says subscribe or join or membership or whatever you call it. Because we, we love to click on buttons. So you gotta have the button. Okay. And then this also applies to the subscribe page. So now you can use that nice long list and you could what I would do, you could have it. You could have it up top. You could. You could also make this box sort of half width on the screen and you could have the for desktop. You could have the copy along side. But use this copy. This is, this is how you are making your, your reader the. The hero in in. In the community. You're making their lives better. This is, this is how you do it. How does your. How does your publication make the life of your reader better? So. Oh, one other touch point email newsletter. Not going to show it but in your free newsletter. The purpose of the free newsletter is to sit to promote upgrading to a paid subscription or membership. Like that's it. That's really the purpose of your free newsletter? Yes, it's a benefit to your readers because they get to see the highlights of what you cover. But for you as a publisher, your purpose is to. Is to get people to upgrade so you can use this format for the copy, intro, sentence and bullet points I would say in the bottom of your free newsletter. So it's always there in a nice block with a button that says join or membership or subscribe. And, and you got, you got your major touch points covered here. Subscription landing page. We talked about the free registration. That's simple. The upgrade message in, in the upgrade nag when on the website and in your free newsletter at the bottom of the newsletter. That's it. Tyler, what do you think?
I love it. It's great. Simple.
Yeah, it'll, you know, this may, maybe this will get your feet wet with ChatGPT. It's a good reason to, to jump in and use it and it'll, it'll save you a ton of time. You can kick this out. Just copy that about us text into the benefits copywriter and then you go in and grab the copy and just start peppering it around all of these touch points that we talked about and watch your conversions change. You'll go from either having very few features or a lot of features to having, you know, how you make your life. How, how, how does this benefit me as the reader? Why, why should I subscribe? And you're not alone.
Most.
99%, 95% of publications we look at, even some of the big ones, are cranking out features and not really focusing on how it benefits the reader. That's it for now. If you have questions or you want us to take a look at your, your website and you're a customer, just reach out and we'll do it. Help you out till next time. See you, Tyler.
See ya.
So if you want our help in actually developing benefits, copy for all your touch points and have us install it across your website. Just get in touch and let's, let's, let's talk about how to do that. It'll help convert subscriptions.
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