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Jimmy Fung rewrites cold emails to cut clichés. Instead of generic openers, he uses direct questions about client acquisition, risk-free offers, and pay-only-if-it-works language to boost reply rates and lower prospect friction.

Jimmy Fung rewrites cold emails to cut clichés. Instead of generic openers, he uses direct questions about client acquisition, risk-free offers, and pay-only-if-it-works language to boost reply rates and lower prospect friction.
Don't say, I hope this email finds you well. Say, quick question, do you need more clients this month? Don't say that we're an agency helping businesses scale. Say, I get marketing agencies more clients for no cost unless it works. Don't say, I'd love to hop on a call to discuss how we could potentially help you. Say, want a free sample of what I can do this week? Don't say, we guarantee you 10x revenue with our proven system. Say, no risk, you only pay if it works. Don't say, just following up. Say, do you still want more clients for your business? This, or should I stop reaching out?