Write Better Emails Faster With AI: Clearer, Shorter, More Professional Messages

TJ Walker shows how to use AI to rewrite workplace emails through three focused passes: clarify, boost confidence, remove filler. He demonstrates turning a defensive project update into a concise, professional message, then applies the same process to meeting requests and follow-ups. Always finish with human review to keep your voice.
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Ultimize. Email is one of the most common forms of communication at work, and most people are not very good at it. Let's be real, they write emails that are too long, too unclear, or too vague. AI can fix that quickly. Let's walk through a concrete example. You need to email your manager about a delayed project. You write a draft that is long and seems a bit defensive. Now you paste it into AI and say, make this more concise and professional. Now you get a cleaner version. Then you ask the AI to make me sound more confident. Now the tone improves. Then you ask, remove any unnecessary words. It becomes sharp and clear. Let's do another example. You need to request a meeting. You write a basic email asking for time. Now you paste it into AI and say, rewrite this to be more persuasive. Now it includes a clear reason and a benefit. Then you ask, make this shorter. Now it becomes efficient. Always keep in mind though, really read it and make sure it sounds like a real person said it. Make sure it sounds like it's coming from you because people are getting better and better at saying, this doesn't smell right. This looks like 'AI wrote it.' Now, AI can be the greatest possible writing partner for you, but it can also be bad if you just let it do one draft and you cut and paste. So keep in mind, you have to be the final editor. Another example: you need to follow up with someone who's not responded. Most people either sound too aggressive or too passive. You paste your draft into AI and say, 'Make this polite.' but firm. Now you get the right tone. Your exercise is very practical. Take one real email you need to send, write your draft, then write it through AI 3 times. Once for clarity, once for tone, once for conciseness. But also remember, it's got to go through a 4th loop— your own brain. You have to look at it and be happy that it truly represents you, because then you'll have better communication, and better communication leads to better results.
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