A short commentary by Matt D. Smith analyzing a UI mockup. He praises the serif combination and the "hold up" label while recommending increasing the size and visual weight of the “delete” and “cancel” buttons, tightening negative space around the controls, reducing the size of the primary "hold up" label, and decreasing gaps between the action buttons to improve composition.
What's going on on this one. I really like this combination of this serif and the hold up, but the delete and cancel feel pretty tiny right here. I'm looking at a couple of things here, like the negative space on the sides and then the negative space in between these buttons, and then also all of this. I'm sort of in my mind drawing this compositional line around this ui, and I would prefer to see the delete and the cancel fill that space with potentially a smaller gap in between those two buttons, and perhaps we would tighten the negative space around all of this. Maybe we go a little smaller with hold up, and maybe we go a little larger with delete and cancel. I think this is shaping up really well. Those are just a few things that I would recommend exploring and seeing if that feels a little bit better.
