What do you think?

Name: What do you think?
Uploaded: 2024-06-24T16:00:59+00:00
Duration: 42 s
Channel: Ryan Maloney
Description: Ryan Maloney reads the back-cover blurb for his self-made book series "Without-a-Books," where characters like Turtle and Cloud learn that embracing what…

24 Jun 2024 · 1 min

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Ryan Maloney reads the back-cover blurb for his self-made book series "Without-a-Books," where characters like Turtle and Cloud learn that embracing what makes them unique brings happiness. He's worried the blurb is too long and uses too many conjunctions, and he genuinely wants your honest feedback.

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Can you help me with the description of this book? I created this series of 10 books, 10 different characters. They're called Without-a-Books, and I just made that word up instead of Turtle Without— you get it, I don't need to explain that. But I have Turtle, Cloud, Book, um, I have all these different characters, and then I made this description on the back. I think it's a little too long. Without-a-Books feature relatable characters who learn that trying to be like someone else or constantly seeking material possessions is silly. Instead, embrace what you're born without, because that's what truly makes you unique and happy. Does that make any sense? Is that too long? Am I throwing too many ands in there? Let me know in the comments. This isn't some sort of engagement hack. I actually want to know what people think about this.