Short YouTube clip (Vince Reed) critiquing an ad: recommends shortening long ad copy, making the call-to-action (CTA) clear, and telling users what will happen after they click; identifies the audience as high-ticket entrepreneurs and references an advertiser named Cole.
A lot of copy, a lot of copy here but was very clear on the front end from the ad. We could shorten this up and bring it up a little bit. I think it'd be great. But I'm assuming when you click on the button it's going to pop up the form. Go ahead and click on it. Okay. Again, a lot of copy there. I think less copy. A clear call to action of what to do and what's going to happen next. So you know, I would say this ad because you're targeting high ticket entrepreneurs and you know, from what I've seen from Cole, I see the ads often, really, really good reputation. It's gonna probably convert because it's so good of a target. But I still would do less cop. Let's copy it. Have a clear call to action. What's gonna happen next. Again I'm forced to read here.
