Vince Reed reviews a sales landing page and finds a mobile-optimization problem: the image breaks the layout. He recommends resizing it, enlarging the bullet text, shortening the headline, adding a name field for personalized emails, and including a testimonial video showing results.
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So let's see what we got here. Let's go right to where he's. Where he's taking me. I don't know if it's not optimized for mobile correctly, but I would take. I would check this out. I think it's something going on with the image. All right, so this is the classic example of a page, I believe, that's not optimized for mobile. So it's having an issue. So you can see you've got the astro flipping. You got the image there. But now go back to the mobile version. Okay. It's having an issue with the image and it's not optimized. So I would go to this page and optimize this for mobile. You could increase the size here of the bullet points and drop this headline down to two lines. And I would say you should probably try to ask for a name. I know it might lower your conversions, but when you send emails out using the person's name, I just feel like it just feels a lot more personal. Also, it wouldn't hurt maybe if you added a video there, show some results of some of the deals you've got or go over some of the tips and the mistakes that people are making and why they want to learn from you.