This is a YouTube video titled "Berkeley Haas Essay Tips #2" created in July 2024, providing a detailed guide on how to write a strong goals essay for MBA applications, specifically for Berkeley Haas. The content is a monologue by a single speaker offering structured advice on essay writing strategies to improve chances of admission.
Looking to write the perfect toss essay? Here's what you need to do. Essay two is essentially a goals essay, so you need to be clear and concise about your goals. But don't just jump in and say here's my goals. Start with context, because this provides us with the buildup that we need to realize that your goals are believable and achievable. It also makes your essays more interesting to read. Then, after context, share what your goals are. Don't just be broad here like I want to be a leader in finance. Instead, share a job title and an industry for both your short term and long term goals. You also want to show why you're pursuing these goals and the impact you hope to make while while pursuing them. Finally, if you have the space, show how Haas is the perfect place to reach your goals. You can talk about some specifics like classes and clubs to show that Haas is the perfect fit for you. By including these things, you'll be one step closer to an essay that gets you an interview. For more tips on how to get into a top MBA program, follow me.