This is a YouTube video titled "Wharton Essay Tips #1" created in August 2024, featuring a coaching session focused on how to effectively write Wharton's Essay One for MBA applications. The content involves two speakers providing structured advice on framing goals, including context, post-MBA objectives, and the importance of Wharton-specific opportunities. Although it is a dialogue between two speakers, neither is identified as Coach Elle.
Hey, it's Ellen, the.
MBA coach, and.
I have tips today that are going.
To help you nail Wharton's Essay one In essence.
Wharton's Essay one is a.
Goals essay.
So you're going to want.
To cover a couple.
Of different things.
In just 500 words. The first thing is context for your goals. I don't like to just have you start out saying, here's my goals.
Context is always great with some sort.
Of star story or professional anecdote because it shows us that your goals are.
Achievable and that you're the right.
Person to pursue them. So second, I love to have you talk about your post.
MBA goals and why you're pursuing.
Them at this moment.
If you want to be.
Specific, include job title and industry, the impact that.
You want to make in your goals, and why you.
Want to pursue these goals. Finally, talk.
About why you believe an MBA is necessary to achieve your goals.
And how specifically.
Wharton is going to.
Help you achieve those goals.
So, for example, if you say I want to grow as a leader, talk.
About how Wharton's specific leadership.
Opportunities are.
Going to help you reach that goal.
You don't want to just use a laundry list of Wharton offerings, so be.
Thoughtful and careful in your choices. For more insider.